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Bay City Information Systems
151 Bayview Road  San Francisco, CA
(650) 403-7849  www.baycity.com
May 5, 2014
Ms. Mary E. Sanders
Personnal Director
Cyclops Communication Technologies
1050 South Sierra Avenue
Los Angeles, CA 90019
Dear Ms. Anders:
I am responding to your request for an evaluation of Colleen Karmichael. Colleen was
hired as a clerk-typist by Bay City Informative Systems on April 4, 2012 and was
promoted to Administrative Assistant on August 1, 2013. At her review in June, I
recommended that she be promoted again. She is an intelligent, young woman with
good work habits’ and a good knowledge of computer software.
As an Administrative Assistant, Colleen not only handles routine tasks such as
processing time sheets, ordering supplies, and entering data, but also screens calls for
two marketing specialists, answers basic questions about Cay City Information Systems,
compiles the stattics I need for my monthly reports and investigates special assignments
for me. In the past 8 months, she has investigated freight charges, inventoried
department hardware, and transferred flies to archives. I need only to give her general
directions; she has a knack for tracking down information quickly and summarizing it
Although the department’s workload has increased during the year, Colleen manage’s
her time so that everything gets done on schedule. She is consistently poised and
friendly under pressure. Her willingness to work overtime on occasion is particularly
remarkable considering that she has been attending collage part-time every since she
joined our firm.
At Bay City Information Systems, Colleen uses Microsoft Work, Exel, and Acess
software. She tells me that she also uses Power Point in her college classes.
If Colleen were staying in San Francisco we would want to keep her. We would move
her into staff work, once she completed her degree. I recommend her highly.
Jeanne Cederlind
Vice President, Marketing
Encl.: Evaluation Form for Calleen Karmichael

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